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What good is my life
if noone ever notice
what I have aranged.
People ignore me
because they think I'm not good.
But they don't know me.
Otherwise they would
turn away even sooner.
Just because I suck.
I am an old jerk
noone really wants to know.
Because of his style.
If there is any....
Speaks things noone likes to hear.
But speaks anyway.
Noone can turn him.
Noone is interested
in the things he says.
Though still people read
and it makes me wonder: Why?
Not enough free time?
if noone ever notice
what I have aranged.
People ignore me
because they think I'm not good.
But they don't know me.
Otherwise they would
turn away even sooner.
Just because I suck.
I am an old jerk
noone really wants to know.
Because of his style.
If there is any....
Speaks things noone likes to hear.
But speaks anyway.
Noone can turn him.
Noone is interested
in the things he says.
Though still people read
and it makes me wonder: Why?
Not enough free time?
This Haiku row was done yesterday while driving home, being slightly drunk. I checked it today when I hope that I'm sober again and I think it would make a fine deviation. Someone wanted to read something longer from me once, this might be it. 
© 2005 - 2024 lalobee
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wow i like it but it sounds a little bit pessimistic for through the end.. but i like it wery much